Wednesday, June 3, 2009

the reflection questios on night

why do you think Elie Wissel wrote this book? I think that Elie wrote this book because he wanted to let people know that genocide did happen in fact some people dont belived it yet life foe him was very painful he had to see his father died. he could also had wrote this book because he wanted to express his feelings in a way that the people would imagen how painful it wasfor those who think that life was easy for them and for people to take a lesson how life was back then.

why do you think that he chose night as the title? i think that he chose night as the title because everything seem to be black for him the pain that he had to go through in that moment his life was dark the pain of having to see his father died it was horrible. he named it night because he see everything dark.

how does Elie changed as the result of his experiences in the concertration camp? i think that he changed in the concertration camp because he went through all this his emotions changed he no more longer cried to his father.he was no longer scared of death.

how does Elie finally come to terms in his ordeal(what does he finally do)at last he checks himself in the mirror and the last thing that she says that he would never forget that day of pain and terror he dint even though of revenge it dint even go in his mind all he wanted was to get out and eat.

give examples of issues in night that still arise today and what do you think should be done about genocide. they should stop genocide and make that ilegal in any country thats abusing from people thats inocent.

Monday, May 18, 2009

THE DIARY OF ANNE FRANK-page 832 (1-8 )



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the families must obey strict rules to avoid discovery. which rules would be the hardest for you to follow.why? the hardest rules for me to follow would be not talking for about 6-7 hours because people would hear us and then tell on us second rule would be hearing music I do that every day but imagen having to do that for about 2 years and ahalf those are the rules that would be the hardest for me to follow

In scene 1, what objects does Mr.Frank finds in the secrect rooms.The objects that Mr.Frank finds in the secrect rooms are the diary of anne and the glove that he found on one of the rooms the glove that was laying down the door.

How are these objects connected with the rets of the act. these things are connected with th rest of the things because they used the glove toso something an if it would not be for annes diary they wouldnt be able to published annes story.

What special meaning does hanukkah have for the families. The special meaning that the word hanukkah have for the families is that it means the jewish celebration that lasts eigth days.

What does annes presents show about her. What annes presents show about her was that she was that kind of girl that liked to help people. She used to think that nobody was bad that everyone was good by heart.

Why do th eothers act with enthusiasm to their presents. They acted with enthusiams to annes presenst because they would really help them in some point for exmaple the tabaco that she gave Mr.Van Daan or the are plugs that she gave Mr.dussel.

What is the historical cause that forced the Franks to go into hidding. What caused the Franks to go into hidding was that they did not had many things to do they could not go anywere they been watch. they forced him to move out his job his buissness. kids in school the jewish kids would have to satnd at the front of the room and they would get spit by the others that were not jewish people more like germans.

What effects does this situation have on their daily lives.The situation that effected their lives was that they would been taken away and then they would kill them or let them died. they also effected them because they would seperate them from their families and they wouldnt not know if they were dead or alive.

In scene 2,Anne and Peter discuss the starsof david on their clothes.What effects do the nazis intend the wearing of the stars to have in the jews. What the nazis intend was that in that way they would know who were the jewish and they would make fun of them they would spit on their face for being jewish.

What background information about the war and the nazis treatment of the jews hepls you link this cause with its intended effects. What it helps me link this cause is that they were treated bad and they would not care if they pass hunger for moths and years.

Mr.Van Daan is Mr.Franks friend during the hidding.
he steels the food in the nigth and they think that a rat is coming during the nigth to eat it all.
they dont have enougth food for the next day they would eat less than the day before.

After Mr.Kraler asks if Jan Duseel can join the Franks and the Van Daans in hidding, what does the dialogue among about the characters reveal about their personalities. I think that when Mr. kraler asks them if he could stay Mr.frank says yes in a good way but Mr.Van Daan says that its okay that there is not enougth food but they would have to eat less and that they would try.

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What do you like best about Anne Frank. How would you like having her as a friend. What i like the best about Anne was that she was always honest about her self and she would never lie to the people around her. I would be a good friend of Anne because she does not care what the people say

What disturbing news does Mr.Kraler bring on new years day.The disturbing news that Mr.Kraler gave them was that the worker that had discovered them ask them for money when they berly ahd money for their own.

What hint does this give about the ending of the play The hint was that they know that they still dont know who was the one that trick on them but they know that it was one of the workers that work there.

What is the time span of Act II. They go in there and they tell them too come out they tell them that they could only take their clothes and thats why she left her diary behind.

How does the characters change since the ebd of Act I. They changed in many ways peter started to talk to anne and her mother and anne really dint talk for nothing many thigs changed for example Margot and her mother.

How do you know that anne has changed. I know that anne has changed because the way that she used to be her mom she dint care about her but know she thinks that she tried the best for her and that they want the best for her.

How can anne belived that....in spite of everything... people are really good at heart. She thinks that way because she says that people are good by heart in many ways that people make mistakes but in the boton of their heart they are really good.

What does Mr.frank mean when he says, she puts a shame on me.
Mr.frank says that anne puts a shame on him because she says that they make mistakes they would act mean and bogus in many wyas but after all that bad stuff they did to them they are good by their heart.



Tuesday, May 12, 2009

THE HOLOCAUST

1)jewish were forced to live poorly and they would have to eat in the streets becuase they would not have a place to eat or sleep.



2)they would make jewish cut out their hair so that they would know that they are jewish.



3)kids that came to school would stand on the front of the classroom and they were insulted only because they were jewish.



4)they would make sure that people would get killed and they would even figure out how to kill them because they had to many people to kill but they were to much.



5)presinors would not have enougth clothes and when it would snow or rain they would have to walk like that they would died in there and they would just throw them away.



6)people that were gay would get killed because they would not behave the same way that others did.

7)people would have to sleep over each other because there was not enough space to sleep.

8) over about 60,000 jews were immigrated to palestine.

9)many young people and kids from the nazi camps were in bad condictions they would starved for food and they had some bad disease.

10) the prisoners would march and that would be called the death march

11) germans had destroyed almost all of the werehouses and they killed almost all the prisoners some of them survive.

12) they had discovered many things for example hundreds of mens clothes and womens to about 14,000 pounds of humman hair that was left over.

13)i learned that the word genocide means that he became a geno and then the word race or either tride he made cide and when they killed groups of people and burn them alive they would call them genocide.

14)they tried to find new ways toburn and kill people because they was too many and they would sit there and tried to figure a way to do it.

15)they would put people in a gas chamber door and they would do what thet needed to do kill them.

16) they expirmented on the people when they were alive still.

17) they tough that theses people did not care and they would do anything they wanted to them.

18) hitler killed himself so that they would not put him in jail or that he would not get in trouble by nobody.

19)police killed about 152,000 and allmost all of them were jews people.

20) about two thirds of the jews people lived in europe before the world war II occured.

21) when the war end in 1945 they saw that about 6,000 europeans jews were dead.

22)some of the jews survive only becuase they were in prison or because they were hiding untill liberation.

23)people that died in world war II would be put in a place full of dead bodies so that they would not be all over the place during war.

24) they would sagragate and they would call people race-mixing.

25) as youger that you were you had less probabilities to live because you would not had to work and you would need more food and more things so what they would do is that they would kill them or burn them.

26) almost about700,000 immigrated to israel because it was better over there.

27) finally the last DP camp was cosed near the years 1957 for the last time.

28)after the war ended they soon found a house were to stay and food to eat they were so hungry that they aet it all.

29) when they liberted the people they saw that people were skiny and that they did not have enougth clothes on because they were treated bad and not given food to eat.



Friday, May 8, 2009

SOLVING A PROBLEM ON THE STREETS

One of the problems that I see and that I don’t feel comfortable with are the gangs.

My first reason why I think that gangs are a problem in the streets is because when they are selling there things in the corner they don’t care if they are kids around there, just think about it they migth even sell weed or other things to your familiar or when they are standing there some other gang migth come and start shooting on them and your around them you migth get hit or something like that. Would you like to be in the streets with out being comfortable only because of the gangs that we have around the block.

My second reaosn why I think that gangs are a problem for our neigborhood is ebcause when you are walking down the streets with your frineds and they see that you are wearing gang colors they start to ask you questions and they even get out of the car and sart saying things about the colors that you are wearing I think that gangs should have a stop because if you take a look and see how many people have died because of them it would be more than the ones that kill for them selfs. Guns and shooting need to stop many people that don’t have nothing to do with it are paying for things that others did. My second reason.

My third reaosn why gangs are a problem is because they drive in the streets and they don’t respect the ligths or the stop signs and they make accidents happened which they don’t care but people around the block do because they want the best for their kids or because they don’t want nothing bad to happen around the place were they live they want it to be safe and be sure that when there kids go to school nothing bad is going to happen to them I also think that if students keep on wearing the pants all the way down well gangbangers are going to think bad about you and want to start something even if they don’t have nothing to do with gangs,
My three solutions that I have for the problems that I see in the streets are that police should be checking the streets a litle bit more to make sure that things are good around the block.
My second solution is that they should put more camaras around the places that things occur the most for example barry and spaulding.

My third solution is that when police see the gangs in the corner they should always check them because they migth be selling drugs in the corner that effects others I think that this needs a stop before this problem gets big and they would be no more solution to it.

Wednesday, May 6, 2009

one day my parents were having a comversatioon about going to the forest and leave my brother and me behind my dad refuse he keep on saying that he loved us and that he would never do that to us but my step-mom kep on saying things untill she convinsed him about leaving us behind. as i look i saw some pebbles that were as shiny as pennies i decided to collect some with my brother so that when we were heading to the forest i wold leave litle peices of them to find our way back home. my dad had given us a piece of bread so that we would stay in the fire while they would walk away, it was dark and scary the animals started to cry for food you could almost see the shadows of them walking foward us we waited untill the sunset would come out a lil bit so that we could go back home it was time as we walked we followed the pebbles and there we were at home my brother knock the door and said here we are my mother said what too you so long that rest was for a long time.



that same after noon they had the same conversation and there we were me and my brother again hearing what they said but what could we do about it, it was like if they dint care of what they would do to us but this time they were planing to leave us more further than time time before so that we would not find our way home. my brother was wake up utill the mid nigth untill my parents went to sleep. finally we woke up and tried to open the door to go pick up some pebbles for the next day but the door was lock we would not be able to open it we never did. the next day my mom woke us up the bed and gave us a piece of bread smaller than the one before, my dad came into the door and said are you ready kids and there we were going back to the forest i turn back to the house and stared at it for a while my dad said what are you looking at and i said at the pigeon but it was only the sun in the chiminey. as me and my brother walked we were leaving crumbs behind and there we were sleeping waiting untill the sun set came out again but when it was time to go we did not find nothing imagen all those birds flying through the forest and there was no sings that we could go back home we walked day and nigth but there was no way that we would go back home we were lost and we walk untill that we found a house made of bread and covered with cakes the windows were clear sugar it was so nice or was it the hunger that we had.



we took a bit of the roof and a bit of the window and suddenly i heard a voice who is tearing up my house the wind the wind the heaven born wind and soon the door opened and we were so scared that we let go out of our hands

Monday, May 4, 2009

O, HENRY STORIES

IN ONE DOLLAR'S WORTH MY REACTION WAS AMAZING NOT BECAUSE IT HAD A SURPRISING ENDING ITS BECAUSE OF THE WORDS THAT O HENRY SAID. O HENRY SAID THAT A DOLLAR WAS WORTH ONLY IF MANY PEOPLE BELIVED IN IT BECAUSE IF PEOPLE STOP BELIEVING IN A DOLLAR THAN A DOLLAR WAS NO MORE WORTH IT IN THE UNITED STATES OR ANY PLACE.

Wednesday, April 29, 2009

the outcast of pocker flat.

if you had tp blame someone or something for the outcast deaths who /what would you blmeand why.
-uncle billy
-citicens of poker flat
-bad luck
-outcast

i think that if i had to blame someone or something for the outcast deaths i would blame uncle billy because he used to not care at least thats what he made it look like he used to always be drunk and when the people woke up the next day all they saw was the snow that was coming down the sky and when they tried to find some tracks they saw that the tracks were going away becuase the snow would soon cover it. i also think that uncle billy has the one that had to do with all thi because he could tries to change but he decided to go with out saying bye and that would make people mad for example the girl that did not eat for about a week so that they could feed someone else and then she died one of the reasons why she died could be because she did not have enougth energy and enougth food in her body.

In my opinion i think that uncle billy should take the blame ecause he made alot of mistakes about how to take care of a family and freinds that like him, for example thegirl that was talking bad about his uncle and the other girl defended him an made alot of excuses about his uncle went to make some trouble when he had left with their stuff i mena thats just wrong. i say that uncle billy should take the blame about all this.

Tuesday, April 28, 2009

TWO SHORT STORIES BY KATE CHOPIN

FREEDOM THE STORY OF AN HOUR
I THINK THAT THIS STORY SAYS THE TRUTH ABOUT FREEDOM I MEAN IMAGEN IF WE DINT AHVE FREEDOM WE WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO MAKE PLANS WHEN WE WAKE UP IN THE MORNING WE WOULDNT HAVE A CHANCE TO BE WHO WE ARE RIGTH KNOW FOR EXAMPLE HAVING TO LIVE WITH OUR PARENST UNTILL WE ARE 22 WE WOULD BE ABLE TO DO WHAT WE WANT OR LEAVE EVEN THOUGH YOUR PARENTS WANT TO. YOU WOULD HAVE TO LIVE UNDER THEIR RULES UNTILL YOUR 23. THATS ONE OF THE REASONS THAT I THINK THAT FREEDOM IS THE RIGTH TO MAKE YOUR OWN CHOICES.
DISABLED RICH POOR, THE BLIND MAN
WHAT I THINK ANOUT THIS STORY IS THAT IT WAS KIND OF MEAN BECAUSE THEY THOUGH THAT HE WAS DEAD AND THAT THEY WOULD KEEP ALL HIS MONEY HE ASLO COULD NOT SEE NOTHING. I DINT LIKE IT WHEN THEY TOLD THE WOMAN THAT HE WAS DEAD AND ALL SHE DID WAS WALK AWAY AND GO TO HER ROOM IT WAS LIKE SHE REALLY WANTED TO KEEP HIS MONEY THAT ALL SHE CARE WAS ABOUT THE BLIND MANS MONEY I THINK THAT THAT WAS BOGUS BECAUSE THE MAN WAS NICE TO HER.

Friday, April 24, 2009

DR, HEIDEGGERS EXPERIMENT

Now that i know that my experiment has work i would confese that i would never take this experiment to make myself look younger im happy that my experiment did work in one way or the other but i would not take it even though if im really old imagen those people who took my experiment they are young again but they dint correct there mistakes instead they commited there mistakes all over again. In my observations i think that people who take my experiment should only take it when they want to go back to correct a mistake that they did or something that is really important for example Colonel Killigrew he made alot of mistakes he had a chance to fix it but he decided not to that was his choice i think that they took my experiment because they wanted to live longer and look younger once again. i think that i would not be able to take my experiment to loo young even though that i know that it works.

Thursday, April 16, 2009

THE CURIOUS CASE OF BENJAMIN BUTTON CHAPER 3-7

AFTER READING CHAPTER 3-7 PREDICT THREE PROBLEMS YOU THINK BENJAMIN WILL ENCOUNTE AND GIVE YOUR SOLUTIONS FOR EACH.
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1) the first problem that i see is that now benjamin sees the girl with honey colored hair and he likes her she also thinks that he is very attractive and that a man of 50 is very mature the problem is that they get married and as go goes older he is going to get younger so that relationship is not going to work at all. i tink that what they should do is talk about it and he could tell the girl how his life is.
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2) the second problem that i see is that now benjaminwants to go party like in clubs and drink but his wife doenst wants to go with him to places like that no more so benjamin is getting tired of her and doenst want to see her because she is getting very old she is 35 years old and have a kid thats 14.
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3) the third problem that i see is that he is going to join the civil war so that he could be away from his wife because he does not support being by her. she also does not attrat him so i would say that she could paint her hair and go party with him some of the times and do the things that she used to do.












Wednesday, April 15, 2009

THE CURIOUS CASE OF BENJAMIN BUTTON CHAPTER 2

ROGER IS SO OVERLY CONCERNED WITH HOW BENJAMIN LOOKS AND IS WORRIED ABOUT WHAT POEPLE ARE GOING TO SAY. WHAT SHOULD HE DO?

I THINK THAT ROGER SHOULD NOT TAKE BENJAMIN FOR A WHILE AND THAT HE SHOULD PAINT HES HAIR AND MAKE HIM LOOK A LITLE BIT YOUGER SO THAT WHEN PEOPLE SEE HIM THEY WONT BE SAYING TO MUCH THINGS ABOUT HIM AND THAT WAY HE WONT LOOK THAT OLD AND PEOPLE WOULD NOT SAY TO MUCH THINGS ABOUT HIM AND HIS SON. I THINK THAT HE SHOULD NOT BE CONCERNED ABOUT WHAT POEPLE ARE GOING TO SAY BECAUSE EITHER WAY PEOPLE ARE GOING TO KNOW ABOUT IT IS NOT LIKE HE IS GOING TO BE HIDDING IT FOR THE REST OF THE UNTILL BENJAMIN IS A BABY.

THE CURIOUS CASE OF BENJAMIN BUTTON CHAPTER 1

WHAT WOULD YOU HAVE DONE IF YOU WERE ROGER BUTTON IN CHAPTER 1?


IF I WAS ROGER BUTTON IN CHAPTER 1 I WOULD NOT KNOW WHAT TO DO. I THINK THAT I WOULD BE NERVOUS TO TAKE HIM OUT OF THE HOSPITAL, AND WHEN PEOPLE ASK ME ABOUT HIM WHEN IM IN THE STREET I WOULD TELL THEM THAT HIS MY GRANDFATHER OR THAT HIS MY FRIEND I DONT KNOW WHAT I WOULD DO IN THAT MOMMENT I WOULD EVEN RUN AWAY FROM THE HOSPITAL AND NOT COME BACK IF I HAD TO TAKE CARE OF A BABY THAT IS 70 YEARS OLD AND THAT TALKS.
IN FACT IF I WAS TO BE ROGER I WOULD TURN CRAZY IN THAT SAME MOMMENT IMAGEN A BABY THAT BERLY BORN 6 HOURS AGO AND HES ALREADY 70 YEARS OLD I MEAN THATS CRAZY.I WOULD ACT LIK EIF THAT WAS NOT MY CHILD LIKE IF HE WAS A STRANGER TO ME.
I WOULD PROBALLY SEND MY KID WITH ANOTHER MEMBER OF THE FAMILY.



Tuesday, April 14, 2009

love

Love is good to feel when there is no pain
Love needs two hearts that feel the same
When your in love you feel your strong
It doesn't matter were your from
love is good in many ways
you just don’t care what people says
love is a strong a feeling you wish you had
sometimes is bad it makes you sad
but when two people feel the same
don’t worry there is no pain
mornings are cold when your not there
my life is private but I will share
the time is passing the pain is gone
but I don’t care I had so much fun
now i know that love is light
I think of you day and nigth
Be honest don’t pretend
Hold my hand till the end

Monday, March 30, 2009

A PICTURE IS WORTH A THOUSAND WORDS




This afternoon was good the birds were singing outside and the kids were hungry and so do I. I had decided to cook something good for us something special it would be pie and bread with a cup of milk and apple juice. The dinner was done at 5:30 in the afternoon we sat in the table and Jose was really hungry he ate all the pie and bread while I was feeding the horse I was thinking of my husband he was killed 4 years ago in a war the dog was laying on my left side leg with her rigth pal on it.

the pie was made of strawberry my mom was cutting out the bread so that we each could have piece of it my son was really hungry he ate all the food including the milk. i look over the window

the Sky seem dark like if it was going to rain the birds were singing i also heard the dogs outside crying for food the smell was good. sometimes i feel that my husband is around me and that he is always there for me.


when i was cooking in the kitchen i feel that he was rigth in there asking for food i was wearing a bow around her neck shape like a bone that afternoon was strange my youngest son Carlos was sad he refused to eat in the dinner table i always served an extra plate in the table because my husband eats with us too.i was happy but at the same time i was sad because seeing your son and Daughter sad makes you feel disappointed of your self that you cant put a smile on their face

we were having fun and eating pie when it started to rain the trees were covered with water and the grass was totally green it was a great afternoon we discovered alot of different things.
the outside nature was beautiful things change on a second the horse had tiny drops of water in his back. it was now 6:30 we were done eating while i wash the dishes and my mom pick up the table the kids were going to wash their hands and then we would go sit down and try to watch a movie as long the rain doesn't bother the TV and it would be possible that we needed to call the neigh boor for help but it was good we watch the movie and all went to sleep and for the next day make every moment peaceful and fun.

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

pet peeves

1 when my sister tells my dad i did something
2 when people lie to me
3 when my dog destroys my things
4 when I'm outside and it starts to rain
5 when I'm walking and dog pup is in there
6 when they scream at me
7 when they don't pay back the money you let them borrowed
8 i hate when they cook posole
9 i hate when they go in my room and grab my stuff
10 when they take the last thing
11 when people are driving and they speed up
12 when people talk while they are sleeping
13 when they call private and don't answer
14 i hate when they turn on the ligths when I'm trying to sleep
15 when people ask dum questions
16 when they tell me what to do
17 when i don't have my strengthener in my closet
18 i hate when i cant watch TV because my dad is watching it
19 i hate when they open the door without knocking
20 i hate when people are talking and they spit at me
21 i hate when they talk about family problem to other people
22 when its hot and they is no air condition
23 i hate when my laptop at home don't have battery
24 i hate when they lose my things
25 i hate when my brother in law comes to the house with out ringing the bell
26 i hate when they give me dirty looks
27 i hate when my brother gets drunk and says to cover him so my parents wont see him
28 i hate when people put gum in the chairs

Monday, March 23, 2009

the secret

it was my best friends deepest darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep.there we were in the back porch talking to each other she had decided to tell me her biggest darkest secret she told me not to tell no one she even made me promise that i will keep it to my self and i did. we had been friends since we were in fourth grade.

she told me that she was going to kill her self one of this days she had problems with her mom and with her stepfather. her father was forcing her to had relations with him and had told her that if she told her mom he would have to kill her and her family one by one. when sh told her mom her mom did not believed her and had talked to her husband about it he said that it was a lie and that he would never do that i told her totalk to her dad and that he would tried to help her, her dad lived in honduras he told her that he would send her money so that she could move in with her aunt and uncle she said that if she was going to be okay she will. two days later her aunt was dead yessnia though that her stepfater had kill her because of the words h told her the other nigth "if you tell someone i will kill your amily one by one" she was terrified and scared.

one monday morning she told me that she had a great tme being my friend and that i could not tell no one about it even though she was going to kill her self it was the thrid time that he ahd abuse her she said that she feels dirty and that she could not support him no more that her mom dint belived in her she hits her when she tels her that about her stepdad. when she told be that she had a great time being my friend i knew that she was going to kill her self that same nigth i dint know what to do i had made a promise with my best friend my head wsa going back and forth spining around with out stopung.

i finally knew what to do when i went to her house i first talked to her mom her mom told me that i was no one to tell her what to do or stop doing i explain how her daugther feel about all this she told me that i was crazy i heard a strange sound upstairs and i ran to look what it was she was in the floor she had cut her veins sometimes its fine to tell someones secret because to can help people be okay and stop them of making an error they took her to the hospital and she said thank her mom left her stepdad and they arested him now she smiles again and she keeps in touch with me through the computer she moved to washington d.c.

Thursday, March 19, 2009

her mysterious death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances and I was assigned to the case. Her named was Alia Chavez an 18 year old who had a baby who had 7 month and lived with her mom in a baseman. On October 14 2006 she had gotten out of work at 8:00pm her friends had pick her up at work their names were Juana and Yolanda who had been friends with Alia since 3 grade they were neighbors. Her boyfriend spanky was waiting for her outside her house for about half hour when he saw her he pulled her out of the car and push her to the floor Juana and Yolanda soon got out and help her up she said that she would be okay but as soon as they went inside the house they started to scream it appears that the people who lived in the second floor heard everything they said it had to be with money he wanted her to give him money he ask her for 600 dollars and she refused to give them to him. He also was hiding from the police and had been living with her and her mom for about 3 weeks fights were going on to often. Until she decided to let him go.

The next day Juana and Yolanda were heading to work but they decided to go check on Alia when they knock her door she refuse to open they told Alia to open the door she had bruises on her face. Her neighbor Erick who lived on the second floor ask her if everything was okay she said yes. As the people who lived around their describes Alia as a girl who loved her kid and her boyfriend they never seen her hanging out with gangs or people who were bad.

That same night they invited Alia over Yolanda’s house they were having a party she went over Yolanda’s house around 7:30 but she was not by her self she was with her boyfriend spanky spanky was 23 he was African American he was a man that did not like other man talking to Alia.



In January 4 2007 Alia was with her baby in the back yard with her dog princess her mom had gone to the back yard and said bye to her she was leaving to work Alia like always said bye mom I loved you and gave her a big hug that same day in the morning she had told her mom that she had a strange feeling like if something was going to happen her mom told her that it was going to be okay.

Erick saw Belinda walking to work so he stop and told her if she needed a ride Erick told her that he had heard her arguing with her boyfriend and that it could be that he hit her often she did not believe on what Erick was saying. That night Alia called her mom and told her that she needed to talk to her about something very important her mom Belinda told her that she would be home around 10:00 she said that when she gets home they would talk about it when her mom got home she found Alia in the floor surrounded by blood her mom called the police the news came ambulance came I was there too.

her shirt was white but it turn red her baby was in the couch crying aloud police said that when her mom arrived Alia had 45 minutes of dead no body saw nothing no noise no one go inside her house or out she had wounds in her body her neck was cut out one knife was missing but the problem is that no one knows who killed her could it be spanky or her ex boyfriend Alex who did not let her make her life with spakny.

We don’t have no clues nothing that shows us who killed her 1 year later they noticed that sapnky had not stop by and see his baby he had been in the hospital since the same day they killed Alia he had crash and was in very serious conditions could it be sapnky who killed his own girlfriend the case was solved one year later sapnky had a figth with Alia he grabbed the knife and wounded her he put the baby in the couch he put a clean knife that didn’t had sapnkys marks then Alia tried to call her neighbor in the second floor to ask for help but when Mari Erick's mom answer Alia was already dead in the other hand spanky ran away and tried to kill himself but he dint make it he was put in a hospital were he was watch so that he would not escaped and then he would be put in jail for 25 years or more the police in my infestations.

when I went to visit spanky they had told that he was dead he had hang himself because he feel bad about what he had done.

Wednesday, March 18, 2009

how to make logandale better

logandale middle would be a better school if we had more things that attract students to come to this school.i think that logandale is a very good school but it dosent take a principal to run a school in my opinion the kids run the schools because without kids they woudln t be no teaching and no school.

my first reason is the food if they make more kinds of food it would make kids or students want to come here because students get tired of eating pizza and nachos all week over and over again. it would be better if they change the food a little bit. they could also change the school ativicties have more sports for example volleyball baseball and basketball that would also want students want to come to this school because we have more things that are fun and things that they could do during the day. its good for them because if they have problems at home they would have less time at home.
wouldn t you like to be in a place were is fun and you feel confortable.

my second reason is that is students would be aloud to come out of uniform during the school year students would think that is cool and they would like to go to a school that they like.i think that is a good idea bacause studenst get tired of having to wear white shirts and thats one of the reasons why studenst come without uniform or have color shirt under and thats why they get in trouble or get an hour detention.i think that is a good idea in many reasons. first reason is that studenstt would come to school with more joy second they would feel free and safe to wear what thety want while they are wearing something that they feel comfrotable in.

my third reason is that if the principal could change a little our schedule it would be fun if they could give us extra time of 15 to drink water and relax that would also help the teachers because they are estress of teaching al week and have to support us. that would also help because we would be that bored in class and after the break we can stop talking and geting in trouble.

another thing that needs to stop is the gang figths i think that they shouldn t permit gangs inside teh school. thats one of the reasons why parentsmove their children to other schools because of they see that you dont do nothing about it they migth be afraid that something migth happen to them of even that the students could get in the gang and do things that could hurt them. i mean many things could happen but the problem is that kids or studenst dont speak up and tell us what they look up in a school.

in my conclusion i think that it would be a good idea if those things were to happen because notonly would bring students come to this school it would also bring teachers for the past 2 years many teachres have quit to logandale becaus ethey dont see to much studenst coming over so they decide to move on. if it would be in my case rigth now to chose from raily school and logandale i would chose logamdale but the only thing is that they need to make an effort to show that we all can and pu more after school programs more aticvities in the school. we can also make a dance program i mena you can do alot of this.




Monday, March 16, 2009

stephanie galvan"s life story

i was so happy when my knese was born she was so nice and innocent.i had been living with my brother and sister in-law for about 8 years i know stephanie very well. she started to walk when she was 1 year old and sterted to walk when she was 2 years old. I stil remember when she said tio for the first time she put a smile on my face since she was born her parents put to much attention to her especially her dad she looks so much like him the only thing that she has of her mom are the eyes everything else is like her dad.

her first bday was big she had a cake and clowns she had a big smile on her face she was playing with her cusins whe she felt down the stairs and started bleeding it was not cool because it was spposed to be good in the first way and she end up in the hospital. when they arrived to the hospital in the emergency room it was empty only 2 persons were waithing so they took her in fast she had a broken leg but hs ewas okay

when she was 11 she satrted to change in her way to think and talk she even started beeing so apart from the family the only person she is closed to is me.As she grew up i knew that we were going to me good frends as she grew she told me her life how she feels and what she tough about people.she always wants the best for them even though they dont like her shes that kind of person that likes to make people laugh when they are sad. one day i took her to wisconsin with my wife all she said was thank you. in my opinion shes a very braved girl she tries to help her parents when she was 12 she did not like her older sister at all she hated her because the things that her sister had told her she had anger against her in many reasons, first because she used to say that if she had never born she ould be the only one in the family and everything would be perfect.

since that day she did not talk to her even if there parents used to be around stephanie is one of that persons that if you tell her to saty away she will. the think that she dosent like is when you say sorry to her she just forgets things like never happen and then you bring them back out she does not like that at all. when she first went to logandale middle school she did not like that school but then she meet rosy and she made a friendship with her as time pass she started to like that school all shhe talked about was school and friends when rosy left from that school she did not want to go to school no more she always used to say im sick or things like that but now in time life she has change shes not a 12 year old that used to be nice now she does everything to keep her head up no matter what happens.

when she turn 14 she was not a litle girl that when she blow out the candles she whished for a wish she instead said thank you for being here is a honor to hve you with me in my b-day party.
untill now nothing important has happen her relationship with her dad is not that good her dad thinks that she is in bad stuff but anything than that is good and if somethiing would be happening she would told me already because the friendship that we had is more big than the one that she has with her dad.

Friday, February 27, 2009

preserve womans rigth of reproductive choice

I think that woman should have the right to choice to have there baby or not.

My first reason why woman’s should have the right to choice either to have there baby or not is

that when you choice to have a baby is when you think that you can afford it and take good care

of it but what about if you have been raped by someone and you don’t want to have it but you

have to because the government say so. Don’t you think that you should have the right to

choice what to do with your body.



My second reason is that if woman cant afford a baby how are they going to feed them and give

them the things that they need for example dippers, milk, and pay for the healthcare that your

kids need to be sure that they don’t have any disease. Lets say that he is really sick and you

don’t have money to buy the baby the medicine what are you going to do or you cant afford a

hospital. Image that all those things can happen to you if you have a baby and you feel that you

are not ready just because the government chose what to do to your body .



My third reason is that many girls have been raped and don’t even know by who your not going

to be comfortable having a baby that his father is a stranger and that when your baby grow up

you have to lie to him telling him stories about a dad that does not exist because you don’t want

to tell him that you were raped in the street by a man that you dint get to know and that you

don’t know him t all I think that is sad because you did not have the right to choice what ever

you wanted to have the baby or not is your body you decide you’re the one that needs to carry it

inside your stomach and the one that is going to have to wake up and feed your baby every time

that he is hungry or when he needs something. How would you feel if you had a baby that his

father is a rapper and that you did not even know.




I think that a woman should have the right to choice either to have their baby or not to because

of the following reasons. Is hard to have a dad that you don’t know and that you will never know

who he was. Is hard to abort a baby because you will feel bad about it knowing that you killed

your own blood. for example there is a woman that had 6 babies and then had 8 at the same time

she said that she could not afford having 6 then what does she do when the babies are hungry

imagen having 14 babies that are almost the same age. Imagen if that happen to you and you

cant abort what in the world would you do.

Thursday, February 26, 2009

life changing event

lhaving my sister change my life we used to be figthing all the time for no reason i just i had a anger that made me not talk to her it was horrible when something wrong happend she used to blame it on me when her boyfriend had come and visit her i could not talk to him because she would tell my dad some bs about me so i just awalked away.i always tougth that she was okey but in real life she wasent she had days without eating she did not scream at me or annoyed me for 2 weeks i was strange.



one day in november 29 2009 she was not feeling well she told me to give her some pills i hand them in her hands and she told me that she had a big problem and so i ask her what was it she told me that she was not sure that she was going through a tuff time and that she could not explain it so i told her to belived and me and she said give me time please and i said yeah days passed and my mom told me that why was my sister doing in her room all the time i told her oh she is watching tv or shes taiking a shower she attually belived me so when i looked at what my sister had done those past days she was always sleeping she ate to much and she always send to the store to buy her things that she wanted but since that day i knew what was happening.



my sister was pregnat she had only one month i told her what is going on why have ou not tell my mom that you are pregnat she quikly responded what are you talking baout and i said you are dont lie to me she started crying and told me that she was going to find the rigth time to talk to my dad well yeah my dad he looks really angry when you first meet him but when he getz mad he lookz really mad like if he wanted to kill everyone,well i told her that if her boyfirnd knew about what was happening and she said yes so i ask her why have you ot tell my parents that you are when yu can count with yor man she said is because im scared i was mad and happy to because i was going to be a aunt and i told how come you were not scared when you did it and she stood quiet the days passed and so on i talked to her boyriend hes a cool guy he has his own house and about 3 truks he always hang around with ma dad they were like brothers.



one day himand my sister took me to the store it was wierd because they never invited me in my headi knew that something was going one in the way they ask me if i had good communication with my parents and i told yeah kinda why and he told me man folkz do me a favor i said yeah what is it he said help us tell your parents and i said iigth. when we got homewe sat there in the living room my parents were there i was so nervous about my dad cuz hes scary so i only said umm rosio and faiso need to talk to you and im going to start umm your daugther is pregant my parents stood quiet for about 2 min it was horrible my mom started crying it was a whole mess so i stood up and walked away anyways i had nothing to do in there so i went outside to take some air.



i was so happy that i was going ot be a aunt it was so exited she was going to get married in december 23 she told me that she was happy to be a mother and that she was thankful that i coudl handle being a real sister form that day she moved house know she lives with her boyfriend and is nice when she invite me go shooping to buy things for her baby is going to be a boy and know shes 5 months or 4 in a half is just crazy because she said that she was not going to have a baby untill she was 24 but know shes 20 and i think that shes going to be a great mother.



we really miss her becaue she dosent come to visit my mom that often she was always in the but i understand that she had to fly and that she fly real high because know we are always together and the past of figthing all the time is over.

Tuesday, February 24, 2009

parents are the best teachers

I agreed with the following student that parents are the best teachers in the world I think that because they teach you things that you dint know. When you have problems they are the only ones that can help you and the only ones that would take yoou out of it. Whne you need a friend to talk to they would listen to you with out reproching you. Your parenst are the ones thattake care of you and the ones that take you out of trouble the ones who are always there to take you out of problems and tell you what you did wrong.

My first reason is that parents are the best teachers because when you have problems they are the only ones that can take you out of the problems you get on other people ar not going to help you like they say they will.when you are happy they know you are. when things go wrong they teach you how to make them rigth. when you are left alone they will tell younthat averything is going to be okay and they tell you how to correct hem so that next time you would not do them again.parents are the ones that teach you how to respect others and how to be someone in the world.



My second reason is that they show you and tecah you the kind of person that you want to be in the world. they teach you how to respect your olders. how to help people that really need your help even thougth they are mean to you. they also show you how to say thanks and apriciate the things that your parents and that other people can give you. your parents will give you what they can and they will work hard to give you the things that you have wanted even if they cant afforted.help in and teach you new things that you wll like to kmow and things that you find interesting.

My third reason is that parents would work hard to give you what you want and if you have sisters they show you how to share with them parents are the best because they teach yiu alot of things that you did not know they show you nature and different places that mean alot. i think that parensts are good because they tell you how life is so whe you grow up you can handle things on your own.

i think that parents are good teachers because they are always there for you and they will always help you in things that you need and teach things that you want to know and things that you find interesting in life.

Thursday, February 19, 2009

a skill everyone needs

a very important skill that a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today is a second
language. a second language will help you allot in many ways. if you only talk English you are not going to be
able to talk to other people. if you learn a second language you will be someone successful in life today.

my first reason is that if you learn a second language you are going to be able to work in many jobs and help people out. learning a second language is hard and sometimes it gives you bad times but ones you know it its
very useful because you get to help people out in any job you have. for example your a police man and you find someone with fast speed you stop them and they don’t talk English but they talk Spanish well you are not going
to be able to help if you don’t talk a second language. the more languages that you know the better your life is it makes it a lot easier.

my second reason is that learning a second language can be useful because if a person is in trouble and they
speak Spanish you are going to be able to help them and help them out with any problem they have even if you
don’t like them you can give them your help.


my third reason on why we should learn a second language is because if talk more languages than Spanish and English you are going to be able to have more friends from different cultures that talk many languages and you might get confuse sometimes but it will really help. for example if you know a second language you are going to be able to hang out with your friends with out having a problem that you don’t understand what they are saying it think it would be fun.

my fourth reason why we should know another language is that learning a second language is very important because you can get a job and they will pay you more and then you can go vacation in the summer. for example if you go to vera Cruz cuatepec you are not going to be able to talk there language or Spanish because you thought that a second language was not necessary.

that’s my reasons why I think that learning a second language can be successful in life and you get to help more people that talk other languages than English. I think that it will make your life easier because you would not feel bad in any way because you couldn’t help someone who needed your help.

Tuesday, February 17, 2009

THE BEST DAY EVER

My best day ever was in december 31 new year in my sisters b-day at first it was kind of sad because she had left two days before her b-day on december 29 2008 because she got married and she was pregnat so all i did was called her and wish her the best b-day ever she told me to come over to her house and spend some time together because she felt lonely and i said no because i have things to do she told me i knew that you were going to say that and she told me to open the door because she was outside.

When i took a step foward my mom ask me that if it was her and we said yes she told the people that we had invited that my sister was coming and that we were going to sing happy b-day they all stood up and sang along when she came in she was criying and people when to the table to eat dinner and people were dancing the kids were runing all over the place i really think that it was fun because i had time to spend with my family on my sisters b-day and we were all together in my house i had a great time doing two things at the same time new year and a birthday party it was good to put asmile on someone s face because you dont only make eople feel good about it you feel good about your self and i think that is important to feel good and happy =)

Wednesday, February 11, 2009

nature haiku


it seems to be fresh

it has lots of colors and trees

it is beautiful.

Tuesday, February 10, 2009

her smile

when i looked at her smile i knew that she was up to something. it was on december 12 2008 we were on our way home when i found my cousin kimberly she told us that she was going to go to our house around 4:30 because she had a surprise for us but as soon as she smile,her smile looked evil like if she was on to something bad that could effect both of us when you look at her eyes you see that she mean and evil her eyes are honest but shes isnt her smile looks like a evil clown that does not have good maners me and my sister keep walking when we got home i told my sister illiana what ha happend and she told us that she up to something she said i remember that last time when i saw her she smile at me with that frown that look evil and it was when she had spread a rummor that i was pregnat does were times that were confusing.then me and my sister tough the worst of kimberly that same day she called us and told my sister that she had seen her best friend talking with her boyfriend and that they hug each other my sister was so bad that she dicided to break up with her boyfriend the days pass and nigths were full of tears that her eyes drop one week later she saw her ex boyfriend and he tired to talk to her but sh ekeep on saying no the things got clear and the problem was that my cousin kimberly liked my sisters boyfriend and she was trying to do all she could to keep them apart but she couldnt we realse that she had always hate us. but the good thing is that kn0w we know that her smile is evil and that when i see her smile i know that she is up to something.
25 things that i will like to do in my life

get a job
learn how to cook better
learn how to drive at 15 age
get my phone back
graduate
go to schurz
visit my sister in florida
have my 15 party
go to mexico
graduate from high school
get my deparment
live with my sister
be a veterinarian
or a disigner
help people that need help consoler
get married
got to texas
have two kids
not smoke
visit the white house
when i died i want to give my organs to someone who
needs it if they help in something