Tuesday, April 14, 2009

love

Love is good to feel when there is no pain
Love needs two hearts that feel the same
When your in love you feel your strong
It doesn't matter were your from
love is good in many ways
you just don’t care what people says
love is a strong a feeling you wish you had
sometimes is bad it makes you sad
but when two people feel the same
don’t worry there is no pain
mornings are cold when your not there
my life is private but I will share
the time is passing the pain is gone
but I don’t care I had so much fun
now i know that love is light
I think of you day and nigth
Be honest don’t pretend
Hold my hand till the end

7 comments:

  1. i like your poem. it's really good. good job. :]

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  2. awww i like your poem!
    yeah i agre with you about when love is good
    keep up the good work stephanie! :]

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  3. I really liked your poem. i liked that i rhymes a lot. good job. :)

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  4. Wow I REALLY LIKE IT !!:) i also like the ending

    That is love

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  5. It rhymes!
    That makes it a good poem.

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  6. Wow you have skills girl!
    I LOVE UR POEM

    NICE JOB****5
    -LORE-

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